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- Sun Feb 11, 2018 12:33 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Roughs
- Replies: 13
- Views: 7823
Re: Project 1 Roughs
Hello! I agree with the previous comments, your green layout looks great. I love the simplicity of the navigation, it is clean and straight-forward. The company name (in your logo) gets a little lost because of the orange triangle, I think it you use a bold font it will work perfectly. Great busines...
- Sun Feb 11, 2018 12:27 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Roughs
- Replies: 11
- Views: 6928
Re: Project 1 Roughs
Hi Marco, As we discussed in class, I think that Index-0 and Index_1 are strong options. The background image brings an interesting texture to your design. On Index_1, you allow the colors of the image to shine through since the image is not fully covered by a layer, I really like that. You did a wo...
- Sun Feb 11, 2018 12:23 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Roughs
- Replies: 12
- Views: 7616
Re: Project 1 Roughs
Hello!
I love your second layout, the typeface and colors are wonderful! I think that the imagery, and minimal layout works so well here! Great job, I can't find any changes.
I love your second layout, the typeface and colors are wonderful! I think that the imagery, and minimal layout works so well here! Great job, I can't find any changes.
- Sun Feb 11, 2018 12:02 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project 1 rough Lea
- Replies: 12
- Views: 7683
Re: project 1 rough Lea
Hi Lea, Normally I always choose a design with a lighter background. In this case, I love the black background. I think it makes the beauty of the imagery/rocks stand out more. I think I would just keep the navigation links in white and remove the white background. You could play with the color of t...
- Sun Feb 11, 2018 11:58 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 ~ Roughs
- Replies: 13
- Views: 7870
Re: Project 1 ~ Roughs
Hi! I like your first design, It immediately made me hungry when I saw it. I love the background image (wood floor) and the coffee beans. Perhaps instead of a white layer on top you could play with a darker color and have the opacity as low as possible to make the details of the wood stand out. You ...
- Sun Feb 11, 2018 11:54 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 roughs
- Replies: 12
- Views: 7556
Re: Project 1 roughs
Hello! I agree with Francisco, your first design is modern. That pink bar across the screen makes your design appear dynamic. I think it will work perfectly with the parallax scrolling effect that you mentioned. I would perhaps keep that pink bar throughout the design. You could vary the orientation...
- Sun Feb 11, 2018 11:49 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Roughs
- Replies: 13
- Views: 6051
Re: Project 1 Roughs
Hello! I admire you minimalistic designs, they are colorful and pleasant to look at. I enjoy the first rough more, as some has already said, the pop of color makes your design stand out. I think this will be a great website, I look forward to seeing it once done. I don't see any changes necessary. G...
- Sun Feb 11, 2018 11:45 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Roughs
- Replies: 11
- Views: 6882
Re: Project 1 Roughs
Hi Sarah,
I love your rough two. The imagery used on the homepage work so well with the colors. It is a very warm and inviting website. I think it conveys perfectly a sense of wonder. It looks so great as is, I don't think it needs a change.
I love your rough two. The imagery used on the homepage work so well with the colors. It is a very warm and inviting website. I think it conveys perfectly a sense of wonder. It looks so great as is, I don't think it needs a change.
- Sun Feb 11, 2018 11:39 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Roughs
- Replies: 10
- Views: 5194
Re: Project One Roughs
Hello Tara, Very cool idea for a fictional company! I enjoy your rough two the most. Even though you sell bottled sleep, that layout is radiant and welcoming. Your name "Dream & Dust" as well as the typeface you chose work perfectly together. I would simply add a "Contact " l...
- Sun Feb 11, 2018 11:32 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Roughs
- Replies: 12
- Views: 5793
Re: Project 1 Roughs
Hello, I agree with Marco, I thing your rough one has a well-balanced layout that will convey information effectively. I like how your header and navigation work together as a frame to allow the products to stand out. I would just change the titles of your product sections (ex: hunting Gear) to matc...