Project02 Prelim

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bdawg11
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Project02 Prelim

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Here's my Project02. Welcome to Bricked Up. Bricked Up sells the best bricks, ever.
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Cole_Richarrds
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Hi, I really like your concepts, I wonder if there's more ways to bring bricks into the design? And it would be cool to see a logo based on the concept as well. I really like your first concept, I like the use of the brick wall in the background. I might choose different fonts, I'm not entirely sold on the current ones. Overall well done, can't wait to see it done!
Cole Richards (he/him) (betes boy)

bmeyer
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Hi Brady!
I like your first design the best. I think the bricks for the background of the homepage is very fitting. I think it would be cool if you incorporated the red into more of the design.
-Bella Meyer

isaacm03
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Hey Brady,

You always have the best ideas. I like the overall concept, and am leaning towards the first layout with the black banner. I think the contrast works great! I do think the overall execution could use some clean up, such as more color or order buttons! Great work

Isaac

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YoAdrian!
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Post by YoAdrian! »

Hi Brady,
hahaah, I love this concept. I like the logo with the brick, but maybe I would add some text to it? I think I would go with your 1st design with the brick wall layout, but what may be cool is to have the background be all gray then have your words/text and products be their cool normal colors? It might pop more and be a nice compromise from the all black background. I really like your thick/big navigation. Maybe try centering it to see if you like that design better. This will be really fun to see Brady!
-Johnna Chism ;)

mckenzie
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Bradyyyyy, this is so you. I would add more of a logo and maybe some imagery like in the background?

Cj9497
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I really like the first set I like the brick design. I like the placement of everything on the page.

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Christopher B
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Post by Christopher B »

Hi Brady,
Clever idea with the non brick-and-mortar brick store!

Potential concepts: As a tax write off on gasoline, you could offer free delivery but add a markup fee into your sales price. Otherwise, shipping and handling could be a ton of money if you're using conventional shipping methods. Customers may choose Home Depot instead.
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Osmar_Sandoval
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Post by Osmar_Sandoval »

Hi Brady,
I really like your design with the brick wall as the background, really helps tie everything together! Although I would probably find a way to give your type more contrast against the dark background to help it be more legible. Overall, your concept is really fun. Keep up the good work!

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Brady, I know you are playing fun, but this is actually something I want to do. You can get a brick maker and simply add dirt to make your own. Build a house for free! Little kids in Pakistan actually get paid pennies daily for making bricks. Put a brickmaker machine ad in? I do like the first concept better, so love your name. If you go with 1, be sure the company name is not competing with the nav bar.
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