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Project 01 Final - Saul Bass

Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2023 11:45 pm
by isaacm03
Hi everyone, here is my website! I am a big fan of the nav menu and how clean it looks, but I want to clean up some of the pages to fix some margining and positioning issues. Overall I enjoyed working on the project and had a good time relearning some important skills.

https://www.grc275.com/student/fall-202 ... index.html

Thanks for checking it out!
Isaac
Correction on link (I am not sure how 7 of your classmates were able to critique since the link was wrong): https://www.grc275.com/student/fall-202 ... project01/

Re: Project 01 Final - Saul Bass

Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2023 1:30 pm
by Cole_Richarrds
Hi Isaac, the link you have wouldn't open the link I used to see it is https://www.grc275.com/student/fall-202 ... project01/, I really like your design! It pops out and grabs your attention really well, I found myself immediately interested it looking at it, I really like the use of colors as. One thing I would work on is the different screen sizes, otherwise well done!

Re: Project 01 Final - Saul Bass

Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2023 9:17 am
by bmeyer
Hi Issac,
I think your website turned out really good. I think the red and yellow work really well together. The layouts are super clean and expressive. The only advice I have would be to make the body copy a little smaller. Good Job!

Re: Project 01 Final - Saul Bass

Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2023 2:05 pm
by YoAdrian!
Isaac,
Dude...this is awesome! You're crazy...live type on top of cool shapes? What??? I wouldn't have ever dared that in a first project. I really love the colors. If I could add anything, I think it would be some kind of form or email address on the contact page...but I did appreciate the cool links. Good work Isaac.

Re: Project 01 Final - Saul Bass

Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2023 1:13 pm
by bdawg11
Hey Isaac,
The design came out so great. I know that having those abnormal shapes had a whole lot of coding behind it.

Re: Project 01 Final - Saul Bass

Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2023 4:41 pm
by liv-lil_cactux
Hey Issac! Great Job! I really like the colors you chose and the fonts. It creates a total vibe.

Re: Project 01 Final - Saul Bass

Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2023 5:03 pm
by mckenzie
Issac this looks amazing and its really well made. I don't have much to say about it for improvement

Re: Project 01 Final - Saul Bass

Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2023 10:09 pm
by Cj9497
Your work amazes me good job with your site. I like the shapes you have made work well.

Re: Project 01 Final - Saul Bass

Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2023 8:47 pm
by Instructor
Isaac, The Home page is very nice, bold and catchy.
It would be visually appealing to have the words not spill over bleed into the background and photos; Watch grammar and spelling (i.e. Oscar)
The instructions discussed posting the link properly-you posted wrong link on forul. It is because you posted project1 but your actual folder was project01;
Be sure to send link to your cell and check if it is working on mobile size.

Your color scheme was perfect!
Your participation in Critiques was excellent!
Upload your zipped working graphics to forum which should have your snag, sytle sheet, thumbnails, roughs.
Prelim Critique participation 12/12 (self and late student not counted)
Final Critique participation: 7 out of 7 ontime turn ins (self and late students not included)

Upload your zipped working graphics to forum which should have your snag, style sheet, thumbnails, roughs.