Project #3_Roughs

Post links to your Project Three websites and preliminary work for discussion and feedback.
aslychsm
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Joined: Thu Jan 29, 2015 6:26 pm

Re: Project #3_Roughs

Post by aslychsm »

Hi Danielle,

Great choice in inspiration. My favorite of your two is the bottom design. I feel like the imagery, colors, and typography really blend together well! Stick with that sort of calming, soft feel of things. Plus, that little light/lantern thing hovering between the top headline is way cool. A cool idea would to give it some kind of outer glow, that will really make it visually interesting. Aside from that, I think you have a solid concept to go off of. I'd also consider making the main body copy justified, but that's my personal opinion. Nice work!
a s h l e y c h i s a m

Kiwakooo
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Joined: Thu Jan 29, 2015 6:37 pm

Re: Project #3_Roughs

Post by Kiwakooo »

I really like your rough 2.
I like the texture you used for the background. Looks great!
Also, the design is very clean and organized. The navigation bar is easy to use.

Good job!
Kiwako

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