project 2 Charlie Johnson

[Cj9497]

here is my project 2 designs for preliminary critique sorry for being really late. For the first 4, I was thinking of creating a square background because most of them have a square layout design for their packaging and whatnot. As for the second set I like making shapes with a pop of color. I think it is a creative design. What do you think?

[YoAdrian!]

Hi there,
Can you remind me of your name again? I don't see your signature anywhere so sadly I can't address you by name...so I'm sorry about that . I really like your 1st design that is mostly pink. The squares twisty design is cool, but could get crazy on the eyes. The only thing I would do at this point is maybe design your own logo for the project vs. using the Arizona Icetea's logo? Maybe it could be a cool ice tea vendor site where you sell every kind of ice tea that's out there? Which ever way you take your site, it looks like it's going in a good direction.

[bdawg11]

Hey Charlie,
I am really liking the swirly design. Although I think that the header needs a box of its own if you do end up doing it.

[isaacm03]

Hi Charlie!

Lovely work here! I like both your layouts, but I think the swirly layout with the checkerboard design is cooler and represents Arizona as a brand more. I do think you should play around with contrast more, as a detailed-ish background like that can be a challenge when using smaller types.

Great work!
Isaac

[Christopher B]

Hi Charlie,

Great colors and great use of non-rigid lines (i.e. curves).

Potential concept: The Arizona Ice Tea logo shouldn't be the same color pattern as your background - it becomes hidden. Inverse the color scheme or create a way for the logo colors to pop.

Good job man,

[Instructor]

Charlie I like your first concept because I like the breathing room, and flowing objects. The 2nd one is too busy for me.