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- Mon Sep 26, 2016 4:40 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Roughs
- Replies: 13
- Views: 6375
Re: Project 1 Roughs
Both of these are very professional looking compositions, though the two roughs are very similar. I would've liked to see more variation in layout and color for the two roughs, but you clearly have a vision for the site already! The use of color and type is excellent. If I have to choose between the...
- Sat Sep 24, 2016 10:46 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project 1 prelim critique magic
- Replies: 12
- Views: 5516
Re: project 1 prelim critique magic
I agree that you should marry the two designs, have the home page be the full illustrated castle and the inner product page be the second of the two layouts. The home page is busy though, but you could take out some of the links and organize them outside of the castle on the bottom of the page, and ...
- Sat Sep 24, 2016 10:42 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project 1 roughs
- Replies: 13
- Views: 6698
Re: project 1 roughs
I'm going to be one of those people that wants you to combine the two designs. I like the layout of the second design, but the green color is a bit bright, especially when viewed up close on a screen. The blue color works better in comparison, but the crooked layout in the first design is a little u...
- Sat Sep 24, 2016 10:29 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project1_roughs
- Replies: 12
- Views: 5649
Re: project1_roughs
Very nice! The second design looks calming and refreshing, more like what a medical company would try to put forth as their image, which I think is a good way to go for a cybernetic product, especially with something that would be as scary as going under the knife for. The first design though, is ed...
- Sat Sep 24, 2016 10:15 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 roughs
- Replies: 12
- Views: 5475
Re: Project 1 roughs
Both of these are really strong, congratulations! The first design looks very similar to a lot of sport websites, and other energy drink sites; heavy in imagery and very focused on the consumer. However, I believe the second design is more striking and unique. The use of color immediately draws the ...
- Sat Sep 24, 2016 10:03 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Very Roughs
- Replies: 12
- Views: 5565
Re: Project 1 Very Roughs
Of the two designs, I prefer the second set. I think the tropical colors better suit the product, and the title is better highlighted with these colors. The only thing that I would change would be to lighten up the background with a true white, I believe it would give the site a cleaner feel. The na...