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by BecomeAHero
Thu Feb 15, 2018 4:22 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Roughs
Replies: 11
Views: 6036

Re: Project 1 Roughs

I can really tell you've put a lot of research into your store and the branding on both websites is amazing! If I were your client I would be very happy with both options! If I have to pick one, I really like the second. Though I enjoy the imagery in your navbar in your first design, the layout of t...
by BecomeAHero
Thu Feb 15, 2018 4:13 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Roughs
Replies: 11
Views: 6204

Re: Project 1 Roughs

My favorite of the options is index_1. I think the colors in the image you've chosen pop, and the opaque background is a good balance between legibility and expressiveness. I d prefer having the social media links up in the top with your navigation though, because I think that would be a cool option...
by BecomeAHero
Thu Feb 15, 2018 4:04 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project 1 rough Lea
Replies: 12
Views: 6796

Re: project 1 rough Lea

Hi! You have some good branding going as far as color, and I think that gets shown off better with your white design. That said, I really like the little active page crystal that you have in your second design. Since the first one is so clean, I think you could have a lot of fun by adding more littl...
by BecomeAHero
Thu Feb 15, 2018 3:57 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 ~ Roughs
Replies: 13
Views: 6972

Re: Project 1 ~ Roughs

Hello! I really enjoy the typeface you've chosen. I think would go over nicely with the target audience for your shop! I personally like your second layout more, and I enjoy the photos you've chosen, but I think I would steal the photographic cut outs from your first home page for the shop page in y...
by BecomeAHero
Fri Feb 09, 2018 10:35 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Roughs
Replies: 10
Views: 4469

Project One Roughs

Hello everyone! For my web store, I will be selling bottled sleep, dreams, etc. To reflect the product, I wanted the colors to evoke a sunset or a dawn feeling. Each rough has a different company name, so if you prefer one name over the other be sure to let me know! I appreciate any feedback you guy...
by BecomeAHero
Tue Feb 06, 2018 4:42 pm
Forum: Introductions
Topic: Hello Class!
Replies: 1
Views: 4438

Hello Class!

Hi everyone! My name is Tara Rinehart and I'm looking forward to learning with you guys this semester. I'm really excited to design a web store and practice with responsive designs. I can't wait to see what all of you come up with!
by BecomeAHero
Mon Sep 26, 2016 5:09 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Roughs
Replies: 12
Views: 6258

Re: Project 1 Roughs

I prefer the first design, the typography is excellent, as the imagery and colors you've chosen lends the site a very classy, beachy, kind of feel which would do very well with your demographic. The navigation is very clean and I can't find anything that I don't like about it! Great job.
by BecomeAHero
Mon Sep 26, 2016 5:03 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 roughs
Replies: 11
Views: 6049

Re: Project 1 roughs

I definitely like the dino design! I think it's very illustrative and you can have a lot of fun with the design and content! I like the drop shadows behind the dinosaurs, it gives them a bit of pop from the background and makes them seems clickable to their own product page. The organ website, thoug...
by BecomeAHero
Mon Sep 26, 2016 4:55 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Roughs
Replies: 13
Views: 5942

Re: Project 1 Roughs

The first design I prefer more than the second. The wood grain design gives it more character, though I would dial back on the saturation, or lighten the image to give you some better contrast with your type. I feel like making the images more equal in size and positioning would improve the design a...
by BecomeAHero
Mon Sep 26, 2016 4:47 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Roughs
Replies: 11
Views: 5424

Re: Project 1 Roughs

Like our classmates, I agree that the first composition is stronger. The use of imagery and color is more unique and eye-catching, and echoes the structure of the jewelry better. However, I do worry that it would be a difficult design to translate on to a smaller screen, such as a cellphone, so I'll...