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- Mon Nov 20, 2023 11:14 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project 3 prelim-Charlie Johnson
- Replies: 10
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Re: project 3 prelim-Charlie Johnson
Charlie I do like the flavor idea on your second mock up, and that your text is not conflicting/competing with any of the other elements. ON you rfirst mockup, the bold colors catch my attention. If you decide to go with the 1st, it is important that you do not allow your text to compete and conflic...
- Mon Nov 20, 2023 11:13 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project03 prelim
- Replies: 3
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Re: project03 prelim
Dang McKenzie, the offset jitter text with the vertical plane flying out well that is simply outstanding. I cannot wait to see how that turens out. Wonderful direction, movement, composition! I like the darker blue, not a fan of the lighter blue. Wing logo is a great simple catchy idea.
- Mon Nov 20, 2023 11:10 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project03 - Prelim - Head in the Clouds
- Replies: 8
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Re: Project03 - Prelim - Head in the Clouds
Johnna, I was so pleased to see this is a made up event, how creative! I like the first one the best. It is sad not to use the snail though, but clearly your cloud needs to be the logo, maybe the snail can be a mascot. I am thinking it could read: 11:00 but take your time
- Mon Nov 20, 2023 11:06 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 3 --- Preliminary Roughs
- Replies: 8
- Views: 46641
Re: Project 3 --- Preliminary Roughs
Christopher, the Home page composition showing Amsterdam city is striking, I hope you use it. Love the gold font with the lights and the watermarked map. The top right is the button? Will users just be used to clicking on top right? delete comma after week, Font choice is perfect.
- Sun Nov 12, 2023 6:23 pm
- Forum: Project Two
- Topic: Prelim project 2
- Replies: 10
- Views: 19126
Re: Prelim project 2
Osmar, my first impression of your homepage Bunny is Bold and Professional, it is striking. Pretty good job on the responsiveness too. I would like to see the body text a larger font. Wonderful Logo! Excellent e commerce form, as well as excellent on putting a "Return to Home page!
- Sun Nov 12, 2023 6:21 pm
- Forum: Project Two
- Topic: Project 02 Final
- Replies: 10
- Views: 37341
Re: Project 02 Final
Cole, I love the neon lazer colors on nav bars, makes me feel like a laser hit me. Wonderful Font choice. I like receiving a message after I submit my form, at that point I need to hit the back button twice to go back home. I love the huge buy images in the cart, and putting the buy button on top wo...
- Sun Nov 12, 2023 6:20 pm
- Forum: Project Two
- Topic: P02 Final
- Replies: 9
- Views: 25661
Re: P02 Final
Bella, the visuals on your shoe site are stunning. The responsive part of it works great, just the body copy gets too small on cell view. Where do you want the user to see after they submit the form? We may be able to ge to that this semester. If that is your own made up Business name Shop the Drop,...
- Sun Nov 12, 2023 6:19 pm
- Forum: Project Two
- Topic: Project 02 Final
- Replies: 9
- Views: 29854
Re: Project 02 Final
Isaac, I really like the Home Logo. I need to hit back twice after I submit the form to get back home. Nice Responsiveness. I like the form let's me know I was successful in sending. How do I get back to home page after I buy something? Buy button could be bigger How do I get back to home page after...
- Sun Nov 12, 2023 6:18 pm
- Forum: Project Two
- Topic: PROJECT 2 LA FINALE ( ͠° ͟ʖ ͡°)
- Replies: 10
- Views: 34300
Re: PROJECT 2 LA FINALE ( ͠° ͟ʖ ͡°)
Kai Well done. Does your About work on your home page? Your site makes me want to get a model. Your logo seems like in was model constructed! Responsive works well shy of the images wrapping. You knocked it out of the park on your commerce form, and how does the buyer get back to the home page after...
- Sun Nov 12, 2023 6:17 pm
- Forum: Project Two
- Topic: project 2 finale
- Replies: 5
- Views: 13926
Re: project 2 finale
Charlie, your Arizona Tea site shows you are getting in there and trying new things. Way to go for you. I would use left flush of text, Larger Text. How do I get back to home page after I buy something (see my note on Cole's)? great trying out that e commerce form otherwise. I thought your log was f...