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by Instructor
Mon Nov 20, 2023 11:14 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project 3 prelim-Charlie Johnson
Replies: 10
Views: 78447

Re: project 3 prelim-Charlie Johnson

Charlie I do like the flavor idea on your second mock up, and that your text is not conflicting/competing with any of the other elements. ON you rfirst mockup, the bold colors catch my attention. If you decide to go with the 1st, it is important that you do not allow your text to compete and conflic...
by Instructor
Mon Nov 20, 2023 11:13 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project03 prelim
Replies: 3
Views: 11424

Re: project03 prelim

Dang McKenzie, the offset jitter text with the vertical plane flying out well that is simply outstanding. I cannot wait to see how that turens out. Wonderful direction, movement, composition! I like the darker blue, not a fan of the lighter blue. Wing logo is a great simple catchy idea.
by Instructor
Mon Nov 20, 2023 11:10 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project03 - Prelim - Head in the Clouds
Replies: 8
Views: 44763

Re: Project03 - Prelim - Head in the Clouds

Johnna, I was so pleased to see this is a made up event, how creative! I like the first one the best. It is sad not to use the snail though, but clearly your cloud needs to be the logo, maybe the snail can be a mascot. I am thinking it could read: 11:00 but take your time
by Instructor
Mon Nov 20, 2023 11:06 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 --- Preliminary Roughs
Replies: 8
Views: 46641

Re: Project 3 --- Preliminary Roughs

Christopher, the Home page composition showing Amsterdam city is striking, I hope you use it. Love the gold font with the lights and the watermarked map. The top right is the button? Will users just be used to clicking on top right? delete comma after week, Font choice is perfect.
by Instructor
Sun Nov 12, 2023 6:23 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Prelim project 2
Replies: 10
Views: 19126

Re: Prelim project 2

Osmar, my first impression of your homepage Bunny is Bold and Professional, it is striking. Pretty good job on the responsiveness too. I would like to see the body text a larger font. Wonderful Logo! Excellent e commerce form, as well as excellent on putting a "Return to Home page!
by Instructor
Sun Nov 12, 2023 6:21 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project 02 Final
Replies: 10
Views: 37341

Re: Project 02 Final

Cole, I love the neon lazer colors on nav bars, makes me feel like a laser hit me. Wonderful Font choice. I like receiving a message after I submit my form, at that point I need to hit the back button twice to go back home. I love the huge buy images in the cart, and putting the buy button on top wo...
by Instructor
Sun Nov 12, 2023 6:20 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: P02 Final
Replies: 9
Views: 25661

Re: P02 Final

Bella, the visuals on your shoe site are stunning. The responsive part of it works great, just the body copy gets too small on cell view. Where do you want the user to see after they submit the form? We may be able to ge to that this semester. If that is your own made up Business name Shop the Drop,...
by Instructor
Sun Nov 12, 2023 6:19 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project 02 Final
Replies: 9
Views: 29854

Re: Project 02 Final

Isaac, I really like the Home Logo. I need to hit back twice after I submit the form to get back home. Nice Responsiveness. I like the form let's me know I was successful in sending. How do I get back to home page after I buy something? Buy button could be bigger How do I get back to home page after...
by Instructor
Sun Nov 12, 2023 6:18 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: PROJECT 2 LA FINALE ( ͠° ͟ʖ ͡°)
Replies: 10
Views: 34300

Re: PROJECT 2 LA FINALE ( ͠° ͟ʖ ͡°)

Kai Well done. Does your About work on your home page? Your site makes me want to get a model. Your logo seems like in was model constructed! Responsive works well shy of the images wrapping. You knocked it out of the park on your commerce form, and how does the buyer get back to the home page after...
by Instructor
Sun Nov 12, 2023 6:17 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: project 2 finale
Replies: 5
Views: 13926

Re: project 2 finale

Charlie, your Arizona Tea site shows you are getting in there and trying new things. Way to go for you. I would use left flush of text, Larger Text. How do I get back to home page after I buy something (see my note on Cole's)? great trying out that e commerce form otherwise. I thought your log was f...