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by kieley_smith
Fri Mar 09, 2018 8:41 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 EG
Replies: 7
Views: 4162

Re: Project 1 EG

I really like your black and white design, it conveys the basic idea perfectly. The page navigation is smooth, and seems to size up and down very nicely! The inclusion of social media buttons is fantastic, but maybe put them in the footer or aligned against the side of the page? When centered they k...
by kieley_smith
Fri Mar 09, 2018 6:52 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Tara R.
Replies: 10
Views: 5920

Re: Project One Tara R.

I love your color scheme, light and fluffy like a cloud, but with that calming deep purple. Perfect~ I also really like how you edited the "sleep" into your product images. It looks really nice and goes perfectly with the rest of the page. (also, haha, dead Link. XD) The only critique I ca...
by kieley_smith
Thu Mar 08, 2018 7:31 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 9
Views: 5086

Re: Project 1 Final

The colors are pretty, and I love the simple, geometric shapes you have used for the graphics. I don't feel it's flat at all, but if you feel that you want to add more contrast maybe use a slightly darker blue? I love the color scheme as it is, though! Everything is very responsive and well thought ...
by kieley_smith
Thu Mar 08, 2018 7:19 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 9
Views: 5072

Re: Project 1 Final

I love your color scheme, the pinks and blues go great together, with the blue being dark enough to avoid the "cutesy" baby colors trap. Your images are ADORABLE. I especially like the crumpled, bloodstained poster look of the images in your slider. ...If you used a brush for that blood, m...
by kieley_smith
Thu Mar 08, 2018 6:31 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 ~ Final
Replies: 9
Views: 4586

Re: Project 1 ~ Final

This is gorgeous and I'm slightly mad at you for making me hungry. That font is just the cutest thing I've ever seen, such sweet little swirls, perfect for a doughnut store! (it loads fine, too.) : D . I can't find a single thing broken, it's just really well thought out and executed. The color sche...
by kieley_smith
Thu Mar 08, 2018 6:13 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final, by FJBO
Replies: 10
Views: 6243

Re: Project 1 Final, by FJBO

This site looks really clean and cool! (I especially like how you edited the images you used to go with your site elements.) . The grey and blue color scheme works very well with your science fiction concept, and the "jetpack" navigation on the home page looks great. (and stays together wi...
by kieley_smith
Thu Mar 08, 2018 6:00 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1
Replies: 12
Views: 6890

Re: Project 1

Wow, that scrolling effect on the bottom two images looks super cool! The bottom-most image seems like it might need a little work to look as good as the gun, though, when not zoomed in the faces of the picture's subjects don't show (on the school computers, monitor sizing is weird). Very sleek, I l...
by kieley_smith
Thu Mar 08, 2018 5:55 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Final
Replies: 10
Views: 6045

Re: Project One Final

I adore the color scheme you went with, so summery and vintage! I also like the typeface you chose, it goes well with the whole fashion idea. I feel like the site would benefit from having different images in each pages header, though. There's so many beautiful clothes in the world, show them off! A...
by kieley_smith
Thu Mar 08, 2018 5:24 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project one Lea
Replies: 10
Views: 5897

Re: Project one Lea

Ooooh, pretty rocks. Your layout is simple and effective, I like it a lot! I especially like how you've made the crystals show up on the nav buttons when the user hovers over it. I see what you mean with the spacing issue. As a possible solution, why don't you try putting both images on each side in...
by kieley_smith
Thu Mar 08, 2018 5:19 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One - Final
Replies: 10
Views: 6036

Re: Project One - Final

I adore your layout and color choices, the whole design looks very fresh and unique, it seems like it'd work fantastically on mobile. The expanding menu is also really cool, and I like how it follows you on your little journey through the site, so you don't have to go looking for it. I scoured this ...