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by selvester
Sun Feb 11, 2018 10:01 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 ~ Roughs
Replies: 13
Views: 6972

Re: Project 1 ~ Roughs

elloz! I like your second layout more than the first. I like the background image on the inner page because it adds depth overall layout. The homepage is clean and is easy to navigate through as well. I might try some transparent boxes around the body copy of the inner layout, may separate the copy ...
by selvester
Sun Feb 11, 2018 9:12 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 roughs
Replies: 12
Views: 6714

Re: Project 1 roughs

I like both too, but I'm leaning to the first "modern" design a little bit more. The light pink and dark blueish colors really compliment each other. I'm also an a fan of the diagonal pink stripe through the homepage. For your headline on the inner page, I would bring the type forward, so ...
by selvester
Sun Feb 11, 2018 9:04 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project 1 rough Lea
Replies: 12
Views: 6796

Re: project 1 rough Lea

I think I would go with the white layout rather than the black. I feel the black is a little harsh on the eyes white reading the white text. Also, I love your logo with all the crystals popping out of it, very cool! I might try to reduce the copy length a little bit though, it feels a bit tight betw...
by selvester
Sun Feb 11, 2018 8:54 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Roughs
Replies: 12
Views: 5010

Re: Project 1 Roughs

This is an awesome store!

I agree with what has been said so far. The first rough's nav on the left side is more legible then that of the first. I think you could push the color choice of the nav type though, maybe all black instead of white?Good job!
by selvester
Sun Feb 11, 2018 8:47 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Roughs
Replies: 10
Views: 4469

Re: Project One Roughs

omg, I would purchase this in a heartbeat, I need more sleep! I think Dear Mr, Sandman is killer for the company name but I too prefer the second layout the most. The layout in general looks clean and is easy to navigate through. The contrast of colors is nice as well. I would swap out the company n...
by selvester
Sat Feb 10, 2018 11:21 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Roughs
Replies: 13
Views: 6934

Re: Project 1 Roughs

I definitely think the green layout is more representational of your product. Your nav at the top is easy to read and use also. I might try a bolder type for your logo, it gets a little lost in the light green triangle. More contrast here would work great. Great job so far!
by selvester
Sat Feb 10, 2018 11:15 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Roughs
Replies: 12
Views: 6843

Re: Project 1 Roughs

I agree with you, I prefer the second layout more than the first. I think this layout as a nice flow from top to bottom, my eye bounces from side to side which is a great way to separate the products you're selling. The fonts work well here too, they def represent the 1920's. Good job! If you are go...
by selvester
Thu Feb 08, 2018 9:24 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Roughs
Replies: 11
Views: 6036

Re: Project 1 Roughs

Wow these look great! I like your second rough more than the first though. I think it's more legible with the tan and white background boxes instead of the multicolored photo. If I had to suggest one thing, you might try a larger font size with Shoppe, it could pop off the photo a bit more. Awesome ...
by selvester
Thu Feb 08, 2018 9:15 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Roughs
Replies: 11
Views: 6417

Re: Project 1 Roughs

I'm fond of your first layout. I like the color scheme and the font you chose, they both represent that time frame well. The only thing I would do is to space out the header from the body a bit more, this might give your header some breathing room. If that makes sense??

Good work!
by selvester
Thu Feb 08, 2018 9:06 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One- Roughs
Replies: 12
Views: 4837

Re: Project One- Roughs

oooo I really like your color scheme. The orange, green, and white play off each other nicely! I also love your logo and layout designs, I tend to like rough1_home and rough1_shop a little bit more than the others, but all your layouts would work well in the end. I don't really have a suggestion for...