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- Sun Feb 11, 2018 10:01 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 ~ Roughs
- Replies: 13
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Re: Project 1 ~ Roughs
elloz! I like your second layout more than the first. I like the background image on the inner page because it adds depth overall layout. The homepage is clean and is easy to navigate through as well. I might try some transparent boxes around the body copy of the inner layout, may separate the copy ...
- Sun Feb 11, 2018 9:12 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 roughs
- Replies: 12
- Views: 6714
Re: Project 1 roughs
I like both too, but I'm leaning to the first "modern" design a little bit more. The light pink and dark blueish colors really compliment each other. I'm also an a fan of the diagonal pink stripe through the homepage. For your headline on the inner page, I would bring the type forward, so ...
- Sun Feb 11, 2018 9:04 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project 1 rough Lea
- Replies: 12
- Views: 6796
Re: project 1 rough Lea
I think I would go with the white layout rather than the black. I feel the black is a little harsh on the eyes white reading the white text. Also, I love your logo with all the crystals popping out of it, very cool! I might try to reduce the copy length a little bit though, it feels a bit tight betw...
- Sun Feb 11, 2018 8:54 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Roughs
- Replies: 12
- Views: 5010
Re: Project 1 Roughs
This is an awesome store!
I agree with what has been said so far. The first rough's nav on the left side is more legible then that of the first. I think you could push the color choice of the nav type though, maybe all black instead of white?Good job!
I agree with what has been said so far. The first rough's nav on the left side is more legible then that of the first. I think you could push the color choice of the nav type though, maybe all black instead of white?Good job!
- Sun Feb 11, 2018 8:47 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Roughs
- Replies: 10
- Views: 4469
Re: Project One Roughs
omg, I would purchase this in a heartbeat, I need more sleep! I think Dear Mr, Sandman is killer for the company name but I too prefer the second layout the most. The layout in general looks clean and is easy to navigate through. The contrast of colors is nice as well. I would swap out the company n...
- Sat Feb 10, 2018 11:21 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Roughs
- Replies: 13
- Views: 6934
Re: Project 1 Roughs
I definitely think the green layout is more representational of your product. Your nav at the top is easy to read and use also. I might try a bolder type for your logo, it gets a little lost in the light green triangle. More contrast here would work great. Great job so far!
- Sat Feb 10, 2018 11:15 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Roughs
- Replies: 12
- Views: 6843
Re: Project 1 Roughs
I agree with you, I prefer the second layout more than the first. I think this layout as a nice flow from top to bottom, my eye bounces from side to side which is a great way to separate the products you're selling. The fonts work well here too, they def represent the 1920's. Good job! If you are go...
- Thu Feb 08, 2018 9:24 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Roughs
- Replies: 11
- Views: 6036
Re: Project 1 Roughs
Wow these look great! I like your second rough more than the first though. I think it's more legible with the tan and white background boxes instead of the multicolored photo. If I had to suggest one thing, you might try a larger font size with Shoppe, it could pop off the photo a bit more. Awesome ...
- Thu Feb 08, 2018 9:15 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Roughs
- Replies: 11
- Views: 6417
Re: Project 1 Roughs
I'm fond of your first layout. I like the color scheme and the font you chose, they both represent that time frame well. The only thing I would do is to space out the header from the body a bit more, this might give your header some breathing room. If that makes sense??
Good work!
Good work!
- Thu Feb 08, 2018 9:06 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One- Roughs
- Replies: 12
- Views: 4837
Re: Project One- Roughs
oooo I really like your color scheme. The orange, green, and white play off each other nicely! I also love your logo and layout designs, I tend to like rough1_home and rough1_shop a little bit more than the others, but all your layouts would work well in the end. I don't really have a suggestion for...