GRC 275 Learning and Discussion Forum

Hi this is Charlie

Cannot seem to upload your page try looking at last week's video it really helped me. The timestamp is 4 minutes through 15 minutes. Can't critique anything if there's nothing to be viewed.

I like how the pictures complement the type with the overall size. I like how the type on the side leads your eye down the page. The text placement isn't consistent from page to page.

here is my project 2 designs for preliminary critique sorry for being really late. For the first 4, I was thinking of creating a square background because most of them have a square layout design for their packaging and whatnot. As for the second set I like making shapes with a pop of color. I think...

Hi Cole

I like your page layout the colors you have chosen work well with the layout. I really like the overall fill of your website. The only thing I would consider is the same color on all pages.

Here it is I'm a little late. I tried to keep things very simple for the first project. I was relearning a lot of things. Anyway, I hope you like it and if there is any way I could improve please comment on what I can improve. https://www.grc275.com/student/fall-2023/charlie-johnson/grc-fall2023/ind...

with the effect you're going for the second one works better. The imagery works well for your page layout design. I like the one where there is an audience present.

I don't like either of the designs to me there are too many colors clashing. It hurts my eyes. By saying that I like your page layout works well, but the colors you have chosen mess with my eyes every time I look at it I get cross-eyed. I would try to dull out the colors using hue/saturation.

I like the optical illusion you have going on. Your concept is great, but for someone with glasses, the colors blend in together. I would try to use less colors, and/or try to pick two sets of complementary colors and go of of that.

I like layout 2 I like the colors you have chosen. The layout is simple to follow it catches my eye. The placement works perfectly with that layout.

To me the pictures clash with the design overall. The whole design desperately needs a pop of color everything right now looks boring in your designs layout is alright but the colors are boring to look at visually.