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by fjbo
Sun May 13, 2018 8:18 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Proj 3 Roughs
Replies: 9
Views: 5369

Re: Proj 3 Roughs

Your site is very cool! I really enjoyed the first design the most (proj-3-home-1.jpg). Since the website is about a photographer, I think that the use of imagery should be the highest priority and that second design fully takes advantage of imagery while delivering an enjoyable and engaging design ...
by fjbo
Sun May 13, 2018 7:37 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project Three - Roughs
Replies: 9
Views: 5652

Re: Project Three - Roughs

I think you totally nailed it with your first design. It is working very well and Shepard Fairey is a very interesting character. I really liked your composition and how you chose designs and imagery that matched a particular color palette. I found that to be very interesting and cool. The whole lay...
by fjbo
Sun May 13, 2018 7:18 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Roughs
Replies: 9
Views: 5691

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Oh my god this is difficult one. Overall, I love the style that you are using on both styles. My inner designer is totally excited about the first one, but I feel that the color palette you are using on your second design might be more appealing by a wider audience. It would be cool to see the first...
by fjbo
Sun May 13, 2018 7:11 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project #3 ~ prelim
Replies: 9
Views: 5548

Re: Project #3 ~ prelim

Both designs are very cool. I really like the magazine style layout. Your color palette is working great and your typography is really on point. Personally I feel that the design with the black background works better because it causes the images to stand out, and the contrast between the background...
by fjbo
Mon May 07, 2018 11:15 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Final by Francisco
Replies: 4
Views: 3609

Project 3 Final by Francisco

Sorry I don't have a lot to add since most of the information is already on the Project 3 Final, live website . Any feedback will be highly appreciated, though since this is the last project that might not happen and it's understandable. Congratulations to everyone too. It was really cool to see all...
by fjbo
Mon May 07, 2018 5:00 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Roughs, by Francisco
Replies: 0
Views: 4482

Project 3 Roughs, by Francisco

Here's are my roughs for my project 3 website. DESIGN I The homepage: http://www.grc275.com/student/spring_2018/francisco_becerra_ortiz/marc-ecko/media/images/preliminary/fjbo-project-3-design-1-homepage-desktop.jpg Design 1, Homepage (desktop) http://www.grc275.com/student/spring_2018/francisco_bec...
by fjbo
Mon May 07, 2018 4:42 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project 2 Final (late) by Francisco
Replies: 0
Views: 4759

Project 2 Final (late) by Francisco

Here's the final version of my website for my e-commerce website: http://www.grc275.com/student/spring_20 ... rtiz/onyx/
by fjbo
Sat Mar 17, 2018 2:22 am
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project 2 Roughs
Replies: 6
Views: 3782

Re: Project 2 Roughs

I love the second layout!

Your green border/bar on the left side of your imagery is unnecessary. Other than that everything else is very well done.

Very good!
by fjbo
Sat Mar 17, 2018 2:09 am
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project two working roughs
Replies: 6
Views: 3980

Re: Project two working roughs

The last rock is just hilarious!!!

The booklet is an interesting addition. I look forward of seeing this finished up. A good thing would been to do a sketch or two of how a page would look like within your booklet.
by fjbo
Sat Mar 17, 2018 2:05 am
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project 2
Replies: 8
Views: 4677

Re: Project 2

Your first rough is more interesting. The ratios of your imagery is very inconsistent on both designs, I would recommend to crop the images to a maximum with or a maximum height so all fit within the same ratio. Another layout alternative would be to alternate your products so if your first product ...