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by UnKool Moe Dee
Fri Dec 13, 2013 11:37 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Aharon Williams-Project 3 final
Replies: 0
Views: 5845

Aharon Williams-Project 3 final

This was a rough project to execute. I had a lot of fun and learned a ton about responsive. The site isn't perfect, but I hope you guys enjoy it. Make sure you have your headphones on because this website has some B-A-S-S. Thanks Michael and I look forward to seeing everyone in Portfolio. http://www...
by UnKool Moe Dee
Mon Dec 02, 2013 2:18 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project #3 - Preliminary Roughs, Donna Harn
Replies: 5
Views: 4301

Re: Project #3 - Preliminary Roughs, Donna Harn

Donna,

I like elements of both designs. I like the use of color and typography in the first layout, and I like the size and visual balance of the images in the second layout. I don't know if that helps, but both of the layouts have something good going for them. Nice work.

Aharon
by UnKool Moe Dee
Mon Dec 02, 2013 2:14 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project 3 roughs-mark pederson
Replies: 5
Views: 4098

Re: project 3 roughs-mark pederson

Mark,

I like the second set with the navy background. I would work on using different sizes for your elements to create some emphasis on your pages. Very nice start.

Aharon
by UnKool Moe Dee
Mon Dec 02, 2013 2:10 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3, 1st critique. Alexey
Replies: 6
Views: 4758

Re: Project 3, 1st critique. Alexey

Alexey,

The layout is very clean and the spacing is visually pleasing. I agree with Rebecca about using the logo more prominently and I also think using color to draw the eye through the page ( in the form of a footer). Nice work so far.

Aharon
by UnKool Moe Dee
Mon Dec 02, 2013 12:14 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Preliminary Critique - Rebecca Baumann
Replies: 5
Views: 4017

Re: Project 3 Preliminary Critique - Rebecca Baumann

Rebecca,

Both of your layouts are well designed and easy to navigate. I prefer the second layout because I think the comic book layout goes really well with the imagery and I think the use of typography is really clever. Good work.

Aharon
by UnKool Moe Dee
Mon Dec 02, 2013 3:03 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Roughs - Aharon Williams
Replies: 4
Views: 3950

Project 3 Roughs - Aharon Williams

Here are my roughs. My artist is the music group Outkast. Andre 3000 is also a graphic artist and created the CD cover art for the group's first 5 albums. In the first set my objective is to play up the music theme for the group Outkast and use visuals to engage the user. I wanted to used that image...
by UnKool Moe Dee
Fri Nov 08, 2013 11:28 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project 2 Final***Updated***
Replies: 0
Views: 4492

Project 2 Final***Updated***

All the links are hooked up now. Enjoy the bacon madness.
http://www.grc275.com/student/fall_2013 ... _williams/
by UnKool Moe Dee
Wed Oct 23, 2013 12:18 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Rebecca Baumann
Replies: 6
Views: 4839

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique - Rebecca Baumann

Rebecca,

I think both of these designs are well thought out and help create unity with your existing site. I think that the round buttons of the first layout complement your typewriter logo better, and the layout and spacing of the elements is very pleasing to the eye. Good work.


Aharon
by UnKool Moe Dee
Wed Oct 23, 2013 12:11 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project 2. First critique. Alexey Makovskiy
Replies: 7
Views: 4823

Re: Project 2. First critique. Alexey Makovskiy

Alexey, I like the first layout with the banners that highlight the products. The layout for both pages are very easy to navigate and use. The product banners on the first layout are too similar to your navigation. Making them smaller or even reversing the color scheme from the nav menu could help t...
by UnKool Moe Dee
Wed Oct 23, 2013 12:02 pm
Forum: Project Two
Topic: Project 2 Roughs - Donna Harn
Replies: 6
Views: 4790

Re: Project 2 Roughs - Donna Harn

Donna, I agree that both layouts have their own strengths. I agree that products need an image to accompany them, but I think that your use of the farm animal silhouettes looks great. If you could find a way to incorporate them into your layout I think it would add to the "homemade" that y...